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Fate

By notebook | Posted: 14 October 2011

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Jack and you had arranged to meet

He wasn’t there; I took his seat

Sat at your table, I ordered you and I drinks

He showed up saying, ‘she’s mine I think’

 

By midnight you were ten over the eight

Not my fault there’s a twist in our fate

I kissed her while you were passing out

Then your fist connected with my snout

 

Result! She preferred skinny not fatter

In love’s eyes size doesn’t matter!

Wasted in your whiskey-induced stupor

We left the pub with She as my suitor

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Eddie Larkin
18 October 2011

Excellent write, notebook... I trust you lived happily ever after!!!

notebook
20 October 2011

Eddie,

Thank you for your insight - happily ever after didn't happen... But that was a long time ago!

Best wishes

Dom

Elkapan
22 October 2011

Good to see you've gotten some action in the game of life, notebook! Got to point out though, 'suitor' is masculine, and the female variant is 'suitress'. The final line a imaged a sort butch transvestite - not worth a punch on the nose in my opinion. 

notebook
23 October 2011

Ah! Elkapan – I stand corrected!

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