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Wow! The satin smooth flow of this excellently crafted write carried me along like a rolling river - effortlessly, as I read! The devestation of a lover's tiff and the destruction left in its wake are very poetically penned. The loneliness is tangible, it speaks loudly and clearly to the reader though both excellent word choice and visual detail which touched my heart as I read. Goodbye is never easy and in this sterling write, your pen is dipped in tears instead of ink! A very compelling write, powerfully expressed. Thank you for sharing, Dom. With Hugssssss... |
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Thank you, Marie, your comment is fluid and concise and much appreciated. Hugs Dom |
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I think the line 'I wake to be alone' says it all - like the soundless words of silence |
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Thank you, hillgem, for your comment. It's much appreciated.
Best wishes
Dom |