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Great imagery; very meditative and thought-provoking.
Keep writing!
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Meditative was exactly the word I was looking for.
Good job.
JD
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An imaginative piece of writing.
Reiner
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Best use of alliteration I've seen in a long while.
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Deep thought provoking poem, I like the 'knowledge of ignorance' ,words that I have been searching for, for years! Keep them coming please.
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