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It's a good poem which conveys how you felt and feel very well.
I've reworded it a little but you will probably prefer your version anyhow.
With his body he stole my self;
His mind had mine for a time;
I never smiled upon his face
yet he still called me his.
He always stays inside my head.
My thoughts - they know him well.
His hands, his lips, his legs, his chest,
I feel him yet it was long ago.
With that firm grasp he stole my self.
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Very Sad, very good, but so very real. This poem obviously means a lot to you.
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Its a good poem....with deep emotion....i would reword it slightly though...but all good anyway :)
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For me, it leaves me thinking that this poem is about someone who was raped. I hope that I'm right, but in any case I enjoyed reading it.
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