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Liar...

By blackrose | Posted: 16 April 2012

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I don't believe a word that you say

lies spill out your mouth in every way.

You think that you can conceal them,

 but it's exposed through your eyes,

you actually believe those trecherous lies!

Don't come to me with your stories,

I do not care who died,

your just using them as an excuse, to cover up your lies.

What?

You think I can see through you?

You're a dog you f'ing prick,

evrytime you spin your web of deceit

you making so damn sick.

How dare you

compare me

to other girls you've seen.

Compare to those skanky hoes

I A MOTHER F'ING QUEEN.

Hold your head down in shame

wipe those tears from your eyes.

I've never been a fan of reptiles

especially crocodiles.

I. FEEL. NOTHING

but numb towards you

there's no one else to blame.

So I'm gonna walk away from this,

I suggest you do the same.

You make my skin crawl,

in everything that you do,

when I wake up in the morning,

when I watch you eat your food.

No etiquette. No manners. No compassion.

Depth of mind.

I can't believe I wasted so much of my precious time.

So watch me turn my back

and mourn me as I walk away.

I'll be holistically dead

if I wait another day.

One day you will grow up

and one day you will see.

I was the better half of you

while you were the worst of me.

 

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Stephen
17 April 2012

Parts of this were really good - powerful and insightful. Just a couple of grammatical errors (I may be wrong) but overall an enjoyable read :0)

blackrose
28 April 2012
Thank you, I would like to work on this poem some more and do appreciate your comment.x
kelly bella
16 September 2012

A lot of anger boiling over in this one~this was written in April and I wonder what you would write about this person now.  There is such honest emotion here that makes me think writing while the emotional iron is hot might be the best time. 

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