Her Way by gwdare

She looked so lost as I touched her hand
cold as the winter lands through snow,
so I closed her eye's for she could
find her way,

Her way echoed a little sparrow
her way away from where she once laid,

Bitterness filled my eyes'
as the last grain of dirt was thrown,
with flowers laid across her stone
I turned with the rain upon me,

Her way echoed a little sparrow
her way across the blue bay
her way up in the blue sky
where she lay,

Her way echoed a little sparrow
her way away from where she
once laid...... 


       Joseph Hanlon

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Comments

JD Higginson

08 April 2009

Hey Joseph,

Brilliantly descriptive piece that invoked pure imagery in my mind.

Keep it up.

JD

Gary Jarvis

08 April 2009

Hi gwdare,

I nice piece of poetry that I managed to tack a story onto so keep it up.

Regards
Gary

Also see: Quest to the Friendly of heart (TheDarkNarrator340) • Determination (TheDarkNarrator340) • Reflection (gwdare) • Isolation (TheDarkNarrator340) • And (gwdare) • Leona, My Dear Leona (gwdare) • Seeds of Language (DeUndrae) • Rise of the Angry Potato (Dr Steevens) • i have acted like a fool (jobejo) • Sweet Loneliness (Dr Steevens)

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Writer gwdare	Total posts: 4
Roles: Writer

Newport, UNITED STATES

I enjoy writing because it gives me the chance to live through someone else. To be able to create a story or poem is something wonderfull. Most of my poetry deals with the loss of someone. I have just ... (Read more)

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