| Comments | |
|
|
Really nice Snow Cone. I enjoyed reading it a lot. What happens next?
|
|
|
Well next her mom dies and she moves to Louisiana (HOW HAPPY JKJK) Thanks for reading my story.
It might be a while till I get anymore writen but please look for it
|
|
|
This won the September 2008 competition. Well done Snow Cone.
|
|
|
I thought you did a great job on this. The quality of the writing seemed like it was coming from a much older person than a 13 year old. Keep up the great writing!
|
|
|
this was really good, keep up the good work.
|
|
|
hi
i've recently joined writers circle. i think your story is really good. pretty much describes everyday for a teen. lol
i love to write short stories with different twists. i was hoping whether you could review my work so i can improve it.
again love your story.
|
|
|
Great Snow Cone!
|
|
|
Snow Cone,
Your righting is really good, keep it up!
taylorswift97
|