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Greetings old friend....

By Hannah94 | Posted: 31 May 2011

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Hey so I wrote this poem for school but I need some help finishing it!!!! I need one simple word to go at the end (indicated by the line) that sums up the poem - any ideas are welcomed! Thank you :) P.S I have to hand this in in the next week or so, so any suggestions before then would be greatly appreciated XD

 

Greetings old friend

You seem surprised

To see my once

Glistening eyes

Staring into your soul

Leaving an eternal scar

 

You thought you’d seen the last of me

Old foe you were mistaken

The day you took my light from me

Was the day I was awakened

 

No more body nor mind

Or debts to be repaid

I am freer than ever

But you old man are enslaved

 

Enslaved to guilt and conscience

That will haunt you till your death

Until the day we meet again

Farewell my old _______

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