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Sandy summer gone

By Carl | Posted: 16 April 2011

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To the tide
of autumn
 and sandy summer gone;

and to lonely home
amongst twig-footed crows
now that the summer birds of romance
 are all gone;

and to the autumnal orange sun
bounced by god or gravity
against the world,

  the lonely wall;

and to the ebb
of summer

 and to leaves -

 to each
  now they are unique

  and old and fay and fey;

to every single crumple,
  fall

 and swansong rot -

to the collective show
 that shoos the summer
  birds of romance out
 but invites the
  winter birds of romance back:

to geese tossed
 like snowballs
 into local ponds;

and to mists and fogs
 upon the fields and lakes -

and to mists and fogs
 upon the road beyond the robin on the gates -

to the tide
of autumn
 and to homeliness

 amongst the
  winter birds of romance

  now they are home.

-

October 2006

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Comments 
Sue Daniel
16 April 2011

Like the seasonal transition that falters reverses then plunges forward again.  I like this transition from summer birds to winter.

Sue

Rose Petals
19 May 2011

You envelop the changing of the seasons in beautiful pictorial grandeur and present it so nicely to your reader in this delightful write, Carl. I love the layout of the poem, the use of alliteration and the striking imagery you so artistically paint. Inked with expertise, a very beautiful poetic pen gem. I have so enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Blessings & Light..........

OnlyShallow
16 May 2012

This is the type of unassuming prose that creeps up on you and hits you with a bolt of lightning when you least expect it; one that pays homage to the universal themes of nature without being clichéd or pedestrian, which is rare.

Without meaning to sound pretentious, it’s the kind of poem that keeps its cool - letting The Reader go to it, as opposed to trying desperately to hook our attention; it draws you in skilfully instead of trying to hijack you by being shouty and ‘controversial’.

Stephen
20 May 2012

Loved the picture of geese hitting the water :0)

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