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Years of Innocence

By The Unforgiving Minute | Posted: 07 December 2011

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Years of innocence, years of glee,

Years that ran away from me

And left behind mere memories

Of the lives we used to live.

 

Years of Triumph, years of Woe,

Man cannot stop the temporal flow

Which whooshes and weaves its way down

Toward spaces not yet met,

Spaces to which we may never get.

 

Years of sorrow, years of joy,

Years ago whilst still a boy

I met a weary, world-worn man, who told me of a wondrous plan

To defeat the ravages of Time;

Escaping into a poem’s lines.

 

This lesson I hope to have heeded well

As I feel Time’s tsunami heave and swell.

My time is short, and his much shorter, but

I fell in love with this man’s daughter.

And once we’d wed, and drank his wine,

He passed away, dear friend of mine.

 

Years of happiness, years of grief,

Our time on Earth is very brief.

 

Years of innocence, years of glee,

Years that ran away from me

And left behind mere memories

Of the lives we used to live

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Truthwielder
17 December 2011

Hi there TUM (for short), I really like the rhyme and in particular the line "Years of Innocence, Years of Glee, Years that ran away from me" I feel I really "get it" - it reminded me again that life is so short, I don't want to leave anything on the table, thank you and keep writing :) Jo

The Unforgiving Minute
16 January 2012

Thanks Jo, sorry this reply is so late! I've just read your poem 'Did time just pass us by?', and I feel I connected to it because it has a similar feel to this. It's good to know I'm not the only one writing about this! So thank you.

Jamie

Stephen
14 March 2012

Really like this - nice ebb and flow

The Unforgiving Minute
19 March 2012

Thank you!

kelly bella
18 September 2012

Another hauntingly beautiful piece. 

I love the way it circles back on itself yet in different words. 

You catch your reader up in your web of phrases and echoes.

The Unforgiving Minute
25 October 2012

Thanks very much, kelly bella, high praise indeed!!

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