Review my work

Started a novel or a short story and don't know whether it's any good? Post a sample of your work for polite, honest feedback.


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Due to a Lack of interest, today has been Cancelled
Warning to younger readers: Contains bad language,mature / sexual references
Rickyban [6]29/08/20103596.25 (7)
BITTER NIGHTS
Jayeflo [19]27/08/20100281.75 (2)
the heart of a hero
Warning to younger readers: Contains bad language,violence
wolfeyesofgoldenrays [157]27/08/20100221.13 (2)
Not sure of a name yet... Please suggest one :)
Strawberry JAM [31]26/08/20100282.00 (2)
latest and much revised start Fi's Journey 800 words
Keiron [79]24/08/20100211.13 (2)
Forever Eden
Eric Bishop [12]23/08/20100160.75 (1)
Silent Rain
Warning to younger readers: Contains mature / sexual references
Ebonyhues [5]22/08/20102331.00 (1)
Short story 'Gaia: armed and dangerous' by Ien Cleary, aka Batweasel13
Warning to younger readers: Contains bad language
Batweasel13 [2]20/08/20101131.00 (1)
Chapter 1 - The Talk - New Version - Please Review
sarah92 [10]20/08/20104280.50 (1)
Chapter 2 - Zeke
sarah92 [10]18/08/2010090.00 (0)
Fade
Warning to younger readers: Contains references to alcohol misuse
Kitty Taylor [3]18/08/20101220.75 (1)
Silent Scars
Warning to younger readers: Contains references to alcohol misuse,mature / sexual references
Kitty Taylor [3]18/08/20100211.00 (1)
Chapter 1 - The Talk
sarah92 [10]16/08/20105390.63 (2)
A Small Chance for Success
Eric Bishop [12]14/08/20100260.50 (1)
The Dream
Warning to younger readers: Contains mature / sexual references
Blueboy [1]12/08/20100431.38 (3)
Skeleton Island
reneel [1]12/08/20100531.00 (3)
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