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Bliss

By pgwebster | Posted: 05 September 2008

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My heart is the dwelling place to which you adhere
upon falling from grace or surrendering to fear
It's then that I watch all the idiosyn-
cracies surfacing slowly from regions within!!
it's then that I touch you with passions and fires
not lustful not wanton just needs and desires!!
Such is the passion I feel in each kiss
such is the ecstacy, such is the bliss..

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Comments

05 September 2008

Hi,
I really liked this poem
it is short and sweet, yet very effective....

xxx

05 September 2008

I like this poem too and I can FEEL what you're saying... Please post some more! I only have a very minor comment. I'm not so sure about using 'Tis'. I actually think your poem would be enhanced if you replaced them with 'It's.'

CommittedVision

06 September 2008

I liked it too.

Also see: It's in the Mind...x (blackrose) • Maybe...? (blackrose) • Stargazer (Katie13) • The weathercock (Carl) • The seal of autumn (Carl) • The brink of sleep (Carl) • The wicked winkle (nonsense rhyme) (Carl) • Listen (Carl) • Poetry... Perhaps? confused definitely! (essexian) • TEAR CRY...xxx (blackrose)

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Writer pgwebster	Total posts: 6
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Shipley West Yorks, UNITED KINGDOM

original poet inspired by leonard cohen and d h lawrence

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