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About Time

By Mr Richard | Posted: 28 April 2009

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It	is
I 	feel
a	dev-
il's	trap	
sat	here 
while         time 
talks         ticks 	
with	 me
each	mea-	
sure	gives
me	mig-	
raine	hell
since	I
tuned	in
I	can't
break	free
I'll	let
my	self
drown 	in
a	dream
un-	till
it	stops
and 	sil-
ence
	SCREAMS !

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Comments

28 April 2009

Very effective!

Keep writing! ;)

28 April 2009

Cool structure had me hookedfrom the start.

Good job.

JD

28 April 2009

Very unusual. It's nice to see someone thinking 'outside the box'.

Reiner

debbie reynolds

01 May 2009

Cool, Different and stands out. Well done my friend!

01 May 2009

This must have been hard to write. It gets better towards the end. I enjoyed this and I shared it with some friends who liked the style. Well done

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