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Lonely WolfMan

By alice t | Posted: 30 April 2009

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On the corner of a busy manchester city street, a man sits. He sits lonely and shaggy like lone Wolf. 

He sits in wait ready to pounce on his next rich victim.

Wolf's hans shake: a sign that he is ready for his quich fix, that will give him solace from the horror of the world.

So there he waits and watches people just like him walk past. Confusion on his 
mind, he had the same life....sometime ago.

His mind wanders back.

Images flash. A soft heat warms his chest. Friends and family. A slow smile spreads across his face.

The love and joy that was then and now lost. The look of happinesss in his lovers eyes.....tears spilt because of him.

His screams echo in his mind, screams of mental pain.

But now, here he is, waiting for the gaurdian angel to grant him peace from this monstrosity that peopple call life.

Smells of food sllither up his nostrils like a snake down to the insides of his belly.
Thunder rolls overhead. The harsh splater of rain pounds on the floor.

Please god, please god! release me from this hell!

He walks away with nothing but an empty stomach, a day without his artificail solace and the pain that screams and never shuts up.
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Comments 
JD Higginson
30 April 2009
Hey alice is this a resubmission because I'm sure I've read and commented on this before.

JD
alice t
01 May 2009
it is. i tried to improve it but i dont think it went well. any tips?
JD Higginson
01 May 2009
You know you can edit any of your original articles without resubmission right?

JD
JD Higginson
01 May 2009
Ok I copied and edited how I would have done it and emailed you the results.

Hope it helps, though obviously it won't be exactly how you would have wanted it.

JD

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