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I agree with the butterfly even if she's a 'colourless' Cabbage White. I guess humans are generally 'colourless' / unlovely in comparison to such wonderful creatures / and cause suffering which butterflies do not. Well, who knows whether they do or not? Maybe there is some butterfly out there with a grievance or mal-intent!
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A beautiful poem well written.
Using multiple question marks at the end of a sentence is often considered improper (i.e. "What???"). If the need for urgency or illustration of higher confusion is needed, an exclamation point and a question mark should be used ("What!?")
I stand to be corrected if that doesn't apply in poetry
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Loved it!
It really resonated with me, as my novel "Quiet Voice" is all about a girl and a butterfly (the butterfly is the voice of her soul).
Thanks for the inspiration!
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