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Little Fairy, Little Fairy

By HatsW3ston | Posted: 02 May 2009

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Little fairy, little fairy,
What will we do today?
Will we laugh on the White Queen's Bay,
Or dance among the Sun's warm rays?

Little fairy, little fairy,
Please open your eye and say,
Say what we are going to do today;
For I am truly itching to play and play.

Little fairy, little fairy,
What is that you're saying?
O, don't be such a stupid fey,
To say today is truly May.

Little fairy, little fairy,
I left with you only yesterday.
We sat and sang on the White Queen's Bay,
To watch the small fishes play.

Little fairy, little fairy,
Why do you say it is May?
For I told you only yesterday,
That in May fairies do not come out and play.

Little fairy, little fairy,
I am scared by what you say.
Is it truly true today is May?
For I truly thought we left only yesterday.
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Comments 
zion613
03 May 2009
Pleasant, playful rhythm and rhyme. Fun subject matter.

Keep writing! ;)
JD Higginson
03 May 2009
Good little playful poem.

Keep it up

JD
Reiner
03 May 2009
Not sure about the rhythm but very nice.

Reiner.

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