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A simple, well-written poem.
Good job.
JD
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This is nice and fluffy. It lacks your usual sparky originality. Remember if you meet a hurdle in life you just have to find a way of getting round it dont give up.
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Thanks for your comments. This is a reworking of a poem I wrote in middle school...I guess I need to rework it a bit more.
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ahhh how this reminds me of school! thanks for this poem
love the image of "spun sugar clouds" - cheers
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This is really nice. I can close my eyes and lose myself in the imagery of the poem. The rhythm is great as is the rhyme; ok, a forced rhyme with down and mown, but who cares, I think it is brilliant!
Reiner.
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Ooh, don't know what happened there with the double entry.
Reiner.
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Ahh spring! My favourite season - not the time to be cooped up as you have so beautifully stated. Love the idea of honeysuckle trumpets !
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