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Spring-fever

By zion613 | Posted: 03 May 2009

Views: 260
My heart is pounding in my chest
I feel its steady, drumming beat
I cannot sit, I cannot rest
Impatient in my classroom seat

Outside, the air is warm and clear
And there, the sun shines brightly down
The birds are chirping everywhere
I smell the new grass freshly mown

Spun-sugar clouds drift through the sky
All dancing with the gentle breeze
My dreams are soaring - oh, so high!
Above the newly budding trees

Small butterflies flit through the air
On delicate and vibrant wings
And honeysuckle trumpets blare
To herald the approach of Spring.
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Comments 
JD Higginson
03 May 2009
A simple, well-written poem.

Good job.

JD
poppy101
04 May 2009
This is nice and fluffy.  It lacks your usual sparky originality.  Remember if you meet a hurdle in life you just have to find a way of getting round it dont give up.
zion613
04 May 2009
Thanks for your comments. This is a reworking of a poem I wrote in middle school...I guess I need to rework it a bit more.

;)
jobejo
04 May 2009
ahhh how this reminds me of school! thanks for this poem
love the image of "spun sugar clouds" - cheers
Reiner
04 May 2009
This is really nice. I can close my eyes and  lose myself in the imagery of the poem. The rhythm is great as is the rhyme; ok, a forced rhyme with down and mown, but who cares, I think it is brilliant!

Reiner.
Reiner
04 May 2009
Ooh, don't know what happened there with the double entry.

Reiner.
Mr Richard
13 May 2009
Ahh spring! My favourite season - not the time to be cooped up as you have so beautifully stated. Love the idea of honeysuckle trumpets !

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