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Barnaby Rabbit Saves the Day
By
Reiner
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03 May 2009
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This is one of the Barnaby Rabbit stories from my children's website. It is aimed at younger children. I hope you like it.
Barnaby Rabbit Saves the Day
Barnaby Rabbit was hot, very hot. It was the middle of a beautiful summer in Orange Blossom Wood. High above the trees and bushes, the sun shone in a blue cloudless sky, and even the leaves on the trees failed to stop the heat of the sun from penetrating through to the woodland floor where Barnaby Rabbit lived.
The birds, too hot to sing or fly, remained perched on the branches of the trees. No animals, large or small, scurried through the grasses and fallen branches looking for food, and it was certainly far too warm for the youngsters to play.
Only the bees seemed to be going about their daily chores collecting nectar from the wild flowers. Their humming was a reminder to Barnaby Rabbit that life carried on in Orange Blossom Wood.
As Barnaby was lazing in his mother's armchair, daydreaming of cooler days and playing with his friends, there came a knock at the door. "I'll get it mum," he said, glad for something to do.
It was Mrs. Hedgehog. "Hello Barnaby," said Mrs Hedgehog. "Is harry with you?"
"No," replied Barnaby. "I haven't seen Harry all morning."
"Oh dear," said Mrs. Hedgehog. "I've been to see all his other friends and no-one knows where he is. You were my last hope. Now I don't know what to do."
Barnaby Rabbit smiled at Mrs. Hedgehog. "Don't worry Mrs. Hedgehog," he said. "I'll find him for you. Harry has probably curled up in a hollow log somewhere to keep cool."
After saying goodbye to Mrs. Hedgehog, Barnaby Rabbit called an emergency meeting with his best pals, Peter Partridge and Philipa Pheasant, and soon they were all looking for Harry Hedgehog.
First, they looked in all the hollow logs; no Harry Hedgehog. Then they searched under the thickest bushes; still no Harry Hedgehog.
"I don't know what we're going to do now," said Philipa Pheasant. "Harry has never got lost before."
Barnaby Rabbit suggested to Philipa Pheasant that she flew over Orange Blossom Wood to see if she could spot Harry Hedgehog from the air.
Philipa flapped her wings, but it was no good; she was hot and exhausted.
"I wish I were a duck so that I could fly over the wood," said Peter Partridge.
"That's it!" said Barnaby Rabbit. "The duck pond. I wonder if Harry went to the duck pond to cool down?"
"But Harry can't swim," said Philipa Pheasant.
"Then we had better hurry," Barnaby Rabbit said, and headed off in the direction of the duck pond, followed closely by his two friends.
"Help! Help!" It was the voice of Harry Hedgehog. "Help! Help!"
The three friends arrived at the duck pond and saw Harry in the water, being held afloat by Mr. and Mrs. Duck. "We can't hold him much longer," said Mr. Duck. "And we are unable to push him to the bank; he's too heavy. If we let go, Harry will sink!"
Barnaby Rabbit thought very quickly and soon came up with a plan. "We must find a long stick or branch that we can all carry," he said.
"Hurry, oh please hurry!" spluttered Harry Hedgehog as his friends searched around the duck pond.
"Over here!" called Philipa, and soon, Barnaby Rabbit, Peter Partridge and Philipa Pheasant were dragging a long branch towards the edge of the duck pond. They lowered it onto the water and pushed it towards Harry Hedgehog, being careful not to let the branch out of their grip.
"Grab the end of the branch Harry and we'll pull you out," said Barnaby, and Harry Hedgehog grabbed the branch. With the help of Mr. and Mrs. Duck, who pushed, and Barnaby, Peter and Philipa, who pulled, Harry Hedgehog was soon on dry land.
The four friends thanked Mr. and Mrs. Duck then made their way home.
"What on earth were you thinking of Harry? You could have drowned!" said Mrs. Hedgehog, annoyed that her only son could be so foolish.
"I'm sorry mum," answered Harry, still dripping wet despite the heat. "The water looked so cool and inviting, so I just ran and jumped in. I didn't know the duck pond was so deep!"
"It's a good job Barnaby and his friends turned up when they did," said Mrs. Hedgehog. "Never, ever, go in water that you don't know the depth of, and always be with friends, especially when near water, in case something does goes wrong."
The lesson was learned. Harry Hedgehog thanked Barnaby Rabbit, Peter Partridge and Philipa Pheasant and never went near water, without his friends, again.
All articles on this website by
Reiner are copyright ©Reiner and should not be reproduced
without the author's prior written consent. All opinions are the opinions of their
respective authors and are not necessarily the opinions of The Writers' Circle.
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This is so cute! I can really see my son enjoying it. Great lesson, too.
Keep writing! ;)
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Many thanks Clifton and Zion.
I sent three Barnaby Rabbit stories to Ladybird books and was told that because each had a moral they wouldn't publish them. I don't understand it. The story posted here lets children know it's not safe to swim alone, Barnaby Rabbit and the Pesky Fox is about stealing. Barnaby Rabbit and the Big Bad Badger is about making friends. I refused to change the stories so they remain unpublished.
As my children's website is non profit making, (I have nothing to gain other than 'hits'), I hope nobody minds my mentioning the url.
http://www.my-kids-corner.com
If you have children younger than about 8, I'm sure they will love it.
Reiner.
Reiner.
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Don't give up! Try other publishers - they can't all be opposed to stories with morals.
Good luck! ;)
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Hi Zion, to be honest, I do give up very easily. Ladybird is the only one I have tried. but now, would anyone be interested in a story that is freely available on the web?
I also thought that being a published, as opposed to self published, author, opened doors, but it doesn't, unless you find your book near the top of the best sellers chart.
I write mainly for my own pleasure, although, I'm supposed to be finishing a third novel for my publisher but as they refused the sequel to my first, I'm not inclined at the moment to go further with it.
However, it's very nice getting positive feedback and encouragement from people like yourself. As in other aspects of life, it's nice to be appreciated. Thank you.
Reiner.
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Cute names combined with a well-written concise story make this a great attraction to young ones but I have to agree with the others - don't give up approaching the publishers.
Hope you make it when you find the drive to pursue getting published once more.
Good luck.
JD
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If this was in print, with nice illustrations, I'd buy it. Kids that age need pictures. Really, send it out to more publishers. And if they don't want something that's been put online, write other ones. I've looked at your website - you're really talented at this.
Keep trying! ;)
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Many thanks for your votes of confidence.
I'm not creating excuses, then maybe I am, but it is a fact that getting published with children's stories is far harder than with adult stories, and that's hard enough.
Some publishing houses use their own illustrators, some don't. Private illustrators often charge quite a lot for their work.
I guess the best thing is for me to visit my local library and look at the children's books, borrow some, and note down the publishers.
Thanks guys and girls.
Reiner.
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You really should get this published, regardless of the fact it's been on the web. As for illustrators, my brother is one...I bet if you went to a high school art class or contacted one of the teachers you would instantly have artwork for your story. You could also search for a professional illustrator, but that's usually a hassle. Keep trying to get through to publishers- I can't believe they disapprove of a moral, all the greats had one- and don't give up. One resource that might help you is the Children's Writer's and Illustrator's Market. You might also want to consider sending it to magazines.
Hope this helps,
Dragonwriter
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It's a lovely story Reiner and I can see the appeal to young children - it does need illustrations though as already said. Like all the others have advised keep trying with publishers and have you tried sending that poem? because if I had to weigh up todays market I would bet my bottom dollar on the poem doing really well - it has a sort of grittiness that is very popular at the moment - just a thought.
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Hello Dragonwriter. I will have a look at the Children's
Writer's and Illustrator's Market and see if I can find the elusive success. Thank you for your comments.
Poppy, once again, thank you. I have posted several poems. which one are you referring to?
Reiner.
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The Grognoths and Grotworts one.
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Thanks, Poppy, I'll see what i can do.
Reiner.
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61 years of age. One published novel. The sequel is finished but finding it hard to place. Have been writing on and off for many years. Prefer to write horror. Also write stories and rhymes for young children. ... (Read more)
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