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Thanks for the warning. I think this is a case of the grass is always greener and will always remain that way. I must say, however, that I didn't feel your conviction as fully in this as your other work.
An interesting piece nevertheless.
Keep it up.
JD
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Is the 'comforter' you talk of what I think it is ? If so this is a P**** envy poem!
Not very keen on your stereotype male! Don't like beer and don't like prancing and have more of the whole barrel than a six pack so sucking it in wouldn't make a difference! Does this mean I'm not a man? Hmmmm ;+0
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He he he
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Mr Richard I dont think you have anything to worry about - it was all a bit of a send up - I'd trade all these things in a male for someone interesting. Nearly said at the start to take it all 'tongue in cheek' but then I thought that might sound even worse! Oh well....
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No actually I think your'e right I was in the pub the other night and saw a least ten of the men you described,there goes my faith in humanity ,boo hoo ;-)
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I like the perspective, but I didn't really "feel" this.
In most of your writing, I can feel what you're feeling, but it was,unfortunately, not that way for this piece...
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PS.
That also may be because of the fact that this is a really different type of writing than what you usually do.
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