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I loved it - I'm sure we've all done this at some time. Well done!
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I just loved the "red rag to a bully" pun - very clever, and very true! I can identify with this sentiment - I've been there.
Just one thing: "I've been practicing/ Getting funny looks..." It took me three readings to realize you didn't mean "I've been practicing getting funny looks". Maybe change "Getting" to "Though I get"?
Loved it! Keep it up! ;)
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Yeah, I loved the 'red rag to a bully' line too.
Good job.
Keep it up.
JD
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Loved this poem - its the kind of thing we've all been through and usually only afterwards do we think oh I should have said that.. but like I'm always advising my daughter even if you're quaking inside show no fear and think of something really clever to say.
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Great stuff!
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Thank you all!
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i like the idea behind the poem but it sounds as if you tried too hard to make it rhyme, and that always lessens the quality of poetry...
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i enjoyed reading this very much, and i can see why its one of the editors choice. it was well written and the flow was really nice throughout.
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Been there
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Evakaye. I can asure you that I did not try to hard to make the words ryhme.It all came so quickly I hardly tried at all!
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I love the poems that just sort of come to you, aswell. This is very cool. I love the last line.
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