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I liked this a lot! Sinister yet compasionate.Like the use of older worldy language.
Tilts the cap and winks at Edgar Allen Poe.
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Oh this is good it sounds like Edgar Allan Poe's work - It feels very dark and I can imagine it being said by someone with a very deep voice. I really liked it.
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I just want to say I didn't copy Mr Richards comment we must have been writing the same thing at the same time!
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Doo doo doo doo doo doo doo doo (Supposed to represent the twilight zone tune.)
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A cracker.
Made my want to write some poetry myself.
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So unusual. I just had to give it top marks. I don't know what else to say apart from brilliant.
Reiner.
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I actually love this so much, especially since pretty much the same thing happened to me but with a blackbird... very emotive yet almost sinister. Gah i have fallen in love with it! And im probably the 10th person to say this but...yes it sounds much like Edgar Allen Poe! :) good work, well done! x
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Can we try harder to be original? Sounds too much like Edgar Allen Poe's work, The Raven.
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I make no secret of the fact that this is, indeed, a take-off of Poe's work. His form is so complex and poignant in that poem, that I tried to make an exercise of imitating it. I hope no one else thought I was plagiarizing? If yes, I apologize. Perhaps I should have mentioned it in the post, but I thought it was obvious.
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you mimick poe's flow so well. nice!!! i give it 2 thumbs way up!!!
Quotes the raven "nevermore!!!"
wolfy
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