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Should that second line be 'Because I always did'?
Other than that some nice ideas - as far as content I just get a feeling that if someone proclaims that much the relationships probably slipped away already.
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It's like a list of affirmations. I llike this style,pondering and thoughtfull.
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A meditative piece; perhaps just a tad too long. But beautifully written, and it expresses heartwarming sentiments.
Keep writing! ;)
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Thank you all.
Yes, I was sort of pondering, when I wrote this, it's got to have been a year now.
Wow. thank you for the feedback.
I think there's more where that came from x
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Nice
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