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Life?

By priyanka | Posted: 20 May 2009

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. Life is full of obstacles and aims. It is like life in balance. What a strange thing to say- life is like being at the edge of death! Whatever, for me life is to be merry. I love to live and live to love! That's what life is to me. Life is to live and well, wait patiently for death! Funny! For me everyone in the world is a friend. I live for because I am destined to die someday. It's really ridiculous that we know that someday we are going to die, but we aim for high and go through the obstacles. Sometimes the obstacles are macabre, sometimes the very aims are. It is like football! We have to win, but in every match theirs a winner and unluckily a loser too. Life is such a precious thing that we can't lose. It's more than money, more than pride, more than anything, even, more than life itself! We all fight for own life, some of the great ones sacrifice their own life for us. I don't understand, why do people suicide? Don't they want to live? The answer is they don't have any thing to live for. So sad! The first thing in my hate list is revenge, and then comes death. I don't like death, especially of a loved one. No one likes or may be there are some? Come on, that's not the word. I try to do nice, but somehow it proves hazardous for others. MISUNDERSTANDING! It's again like football! Fouls! 
	Life is like a very long music. For few, it ends soon, for some it's very long. For few it's loud, for some it's stealthy. For me it's always in groove, always jingling and for some it's tingling! We all play music, the music of our lives. We play music, in our room, in our city, in our state, in our nation, in our continent and lastly in this world. We all play different music, (an orchestra) mine is totally different from anyone's. We all have unique music, so we all are totally different from each other. Each person is unique. Even, the twins, my own cousin sisters are identical twins. They look almost same, but are totally different from each other. If we are totally different from each other then, there's no need to die because of being excluded one or the reluctant or the useless one.
	Life is an adventure. We explore for success and climb the cliffs of our goal! (Not football!) Every problem is just a new turn in our adventure. If we are falling in a ditch, we can recover, if we are alert. If we try hard for achieving our goal, we will get a positive result. No matter if we lose, that is the only adventure! We explore for the things that we never had before, but if we don't get it, it's still not the end. It's called the new beginning, the new beginning of a new adventure! For living life we all needn't be adventurous in real because the ups and downs of the life itself are the true adventure. Others may have some different concepts of life, but for me life is a prize. The ultimate gift! From beginning itself I got this prize, and then what's the reason for crying at a corner for my bad times and sobbing for minuscule reasons? 
	Life is a mystery. We should solve it. It's a puzzle which's solution we get at our death. It's a riddle which can be answered only at our end. It's a poem with a same end for everyone- death. It's a journey, a holiday, a calendar, a newspaper, a diary, a class room, a cupboard, a dustbin, a bowl, an apple, an airplane, a flower, a computer, an exercise, an assignment, a window, an electric wire, a room, a game, an aim, The cosmos............ life is a curse and a blessing! That's what the life is! Live it and keep on smiling?
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Comments 
zion613
20 May 2009
You have a very positive, cheerful style - that's great. You just need to organize your thoughts better. I really liked the music analogy - very apt.

Happy writing! ;)
ChrissieJo
20 May 2009
It is great to put the thoughts down as they come to you but it has made this beautiful piece of writing seem a bit antsy. I got the main message which is perhaps you desire to make people see how contrary life is. Altogether, a good try . Well done.
ChrissieJo
20 May 2009
oops!! ......."Your desire" not "you desire". Cheers
wolfeyesofgoldenrays
10 February 2010
you have awsome talent. you could really perfect it here. good job
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