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Interesting...a little vague, but interesting. I like the very visual form - love it when poets do that!
Keep writing! ;)
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Thanks guys for the comments. I'm still new to poetry, so that maybe why my poetry is a bit vague. Oh well, back to the drawing board!
Again. thanks!
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I'll post a revised edition later. For now keep critquing this version. Thanks!
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Alright, posted the final draft for sure. Enjoy!
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This piece or written art is very intriguing and mind stimulating. The speaker is very articulate and creative in his imagery. THe speaker is well on his way to becoming a very impressive poetic writer.
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