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Tales of a Memory

By DeUndrae | Posted: 20 May 2009

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Tales of a Memory

Anime, narcissistic, loves to brag
	Pokingmyheadand
			Telling
				Her
					 Tales.

				      	 "Bam!
				"Ching!
			"Poof!	
		"Kabam!"

Igazedintoher
Large		glass		balls,
	Blueandblackinkfusing
Then				         separating
		   			  Into
				Two		   little
		   			 Rings.

Bangs
Her		brooms
Brash		yet		bashful
Polished
		Her pearl.

Her hair,
A scent of sage
Coiled and shifted
Into		catchy
	Styles
		Long
			Bobcut
				Wavy
			Short
		Afro
	Spiky

	"Dye?" I asked
Lookingather
	Blue hair.
	She shook
		Her head.
Ping!
	Blue
		To Red
	To Green
		To orange
	To blonde

"Wow!" I said.
	Touched her arm.
Skin?			No.
Fur.			Soft
Feline fur
	Forming
		From her
			Arms.
Striped
Yellow stripes and
Orange strands.

Brushed her ears
		Feline ears
Twitching as my finger
Whirled beside her
	Tickling my nerves.

Numbness			pricks.
I	looked		left	and
	Saw a skinny boa
Wrappingaroundmy
			Left wrist.
No.				Her tail
Her feline tail
Tugging
	Coiling
		Pressing
			Pressing
				Swaying
Left					Right.
	My hand, my shoulder
Followed.
	I press against her breasts
Pressed against
Her sand-colored face.

	Heat rose
AsifIwasin
	Hell
Sweat
An ocean of it
	Dripping
Onmyface
Stingingmyeyes
Bump-bumpbump-bumpbump-bumpbump-bump
	At once
		My mouth opened
Then "Sssssssh."
	Index and middle fingers
Slender as a straw
Crept		and		pressed
	To my		lips
Bringing in 
A sub-zero air conditioner.
	I stared
Into her eyes
Her eyes
	"No need to talk," she said,
Her snake-like tail
Coiling around	my toothpick body.

Myhead
Hurtsomuch
My		mind		fading
Breaking				apart.

"Are		you		okay?" Anime asks.
		Snappingmeback
To her world and
My memories.
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Comments 
zion613
20 May 2009
Interesting...a little vague, but interesting. I like the very visual form - love it when poets do that!

Keep writing! ;)
DeUndrae
21 May 2009
Thanks guys for the comments. I'm still new to poetry, so that maybe why my poetry is a bit vague. Oh well, back to the drawing board!

Again. thanks!
DeUndrae
21 May 2009
I'll post a revised edition later. For now keep critquing this version. Thanks!
DeUndrae
22 May 2009
Alright, posted the final draft for sure. Enjoy!
Anonymous
25 May 2009
This piece or written art is very intriguing and mind stimulating.  The speaker is very articulate and creative in his imagery.  THe speaker is well on his way to becoming a very impressive poetic writer.

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