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Very nice! Descriptive, almost lyrical language. Definitely use it in something!
Keep writing! ;)
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oooooooh i love this!!! its so romantic! :) really great :) you have to write a romance novel with this included :D x
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Intriguing and romantic ,this could be (In my opinion) writen as a poem or indeed into a story, good work.
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I agree. It's a good basis for a story.
Keep us posted if you decide to do it.
Good luck.
JD
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