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What did you say?

By Elaine | Posted: 20 May 2009

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Swirling churning, circling. My stomach somersaulted with disbelief. Did he really say that? Did he mean it?  Is he sure? My mind whirred at the thought of it all and the possibilties spiralled endlessly into the distance like a star exploding into its magnificent brightness.

My palms were damp with sweat. I looked at my shaking hands, my heart was racing. "Say it again" The words whispered across the room echoeing in the moonlit night, my voice quivering in the silence.   He walked toward me framed by in the moonlit to a perfect silhouette of man.  

"Will you be my wife?" he voice softly caressed me as reached for my hand.  He eyes sparkled with passion and he looked into my eyes. "Yes" I whispered from deep inside "Yes".
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Comments 
zion613
20 May 2009
Very nice! Descriptive, almost lyrical language. Definitely use it in something!

Keep writing! ;)
evakaye
22 May 2009
oooooooh i love this!!! its so romantic! :) really great :) you have to write a romance novel with this included :D x
debbie reynolds
22 May 2009
Intriguing and romantic ,this could  be  (In my opinion) writen as a poem or indeed into a story, good work.
JD Higginson
23 May 2009
I agree. It's a good basis for a story.

Keep us posted if you decide to do it.

Good luck.

JD

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