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Completely true.
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A nice sentiment, though not really something that's very easy to judge as a piece. A story based on this sentiment could work well, however.
Happy writing.
JD
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Good premise for a poem. I'd love to see this expanded and polished!
Good luck! ;)
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Now this isn't too bad because it's a true sentiment that everyone can identify with. If you want to pay your readers a compliment then you could take the trouble to write correctly for them as follows:
''Missing someone isn't about how long it's been since you seen them last,
or the amount of time since you last talked''
Missing someone isn't about how long it's been since you last saw them....
That way the reader doesn't have to interrupt the flow of your words with irritating little alarm bells that say 'error'.
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There's some real power in this explanation - power that comes from wrapping up truth in a nutshell - well done.
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girl u got some depth..lol..love u ree!
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Wow, this one is really good.
Just an idea : Maybe it could be extended more?
It seems sort of like a quote right now (A Very Good One!)
Keep Writing!
taylorswift97
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