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Dear Brain,

By Jennierose | Posted: 30 May 2009

Views: 180
You're destroying me,
Killing me.
Can't you help me this once?

It's getting late,
I'm falling asleep,
But the page is still blank.

I need inspiration
From you, please!
My time's running out.

Just a few words, 
That's all I need.
This isn't the time for wandering.

I need you,
Guide me.
I'm so lost without you.

Save me.
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Comments 
Jennierose
30 May 2009
Thanks, if I'm honest I don't really like this poem.  It was kind of a spare of the moment thing, and I thought I may as well put it up here to see what people thought of it.

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