MY P@IN!!! by Baby T

I ain't no Politician
I ain't no Priest
I ain't no doctor 
I came straight from the streets....
I breathe the hood
I exhale the hustle
I beat the block like the veins in my muscles

I exercise with caution 
I practice with peace
I breathe with positivity
Damn it i'm gonna run the streets....

I don't like the violence 
I don't like the pain
I hate the struggle
And God knows 
I cud do without the rain...

But we all gotta Testify
And plead the fifth
That Living life without 
Pain, Struggle or Violence 
IS just another Story book 
MYTH!!

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Comments

AVFreaky22

07 June 2009

This rap is intriguing, you have a lot talent. Its real, raw and different. The reader feels the harsh reality of life through your words. The last stanza is very much true. Good job. :)

zion613

09 June 2009

Very nice! The previous comment stole much of my thunder, so let me just say I liked it a lot. There's a lot of anger in your work - I hope you don't find this callous, but it makes for some great writing.

Good job! ;)

Mr Richard

10 June 2009

Great someone doing rap in the writers circle a genre of it's own and as valid as any other, more please.

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Lyrically inclined Guaranteed to blow ur mind.. spit lyrics like the air u breathe.. ppl see me talk and the plead, beg for forgiveness cuz my rhymes are deadly my hook is the killer... step into a battle ... (Read more)

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