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Just Desserts

By mlambere | Posted: 14 June 2009

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This is a tanka style Poem 


Banana's in crime
Taken into custardy 
Intoxicated! 

a rum do for this sweet jury
Just desserts, the trifle went down

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zion613

15 June 2009

This is so cute and clever, it made me smile!

Good job! ;)

Mr Richard

15 June 2009

Ha ha Very good ! love the "Taken in custardy " line. What a sweet little poem!

Also see: Two dog black and white photograph (Johnty) • The Old Major (DaveGray) • Lake with no birds (Mr Richard) • Not (evakaye) • battle scars (wolfeyesofgoldenrays) • Big Fat Bum (mlambere) • betrayal (wolfeyesofgoldenrays) • Haiku: Shelter (zion613) • Haiku: Anticipation (zion613) • Keep it green (poppy101)

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43 year old IT Project Manager, travel alot so atttempt to write a bit of Poetry now and then when travelling. Love sport, trialthlon, bodybuilding. I try to write in a humourous style but also love a ... (Read more)

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