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Personally, I feel this conveys an extremely powerful sense of camaraderie. Despite technical flaws, the raw emotion contained within each stanza kept me hooked until the finish.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery created with 'memory lane' and 'iron gates.' The idea that the strength of your bond can overcome any physical obstacle is a nice touch.
In summary, I think it is an excellent piece of work although, grammatically, it could do with reassessment.
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Wow. Thank you! I rarely do poetry, but when I do it's usually just for fun. Glad you liked it!
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This has a very strong and powerful feel to it.
Very nice choices of words in it... some were small words, but you chose them perfectly, making it describe just what point you wanted to reach.
You are a very imaginative writer, which is a required trait for a great writer!
Well Done!
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This piece is very good, I respect the thought you put behind it as well. Putting thoughts into poems is half of writting them. you should try to come up with more of them. Plus there is so much that you can write about, but if you need help with any of them just ask me and I'll happily tell you. For exmaples you can check out any of my work.
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Enjoy - I did, more please. A great way to celebrate friendship.
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Aww, thanks everyone! I'll post my next poem- it's about courage. Enjoy!
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