Twine 
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Kudos 17.25 after 20 votes |
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I raise my arms in the attempt,
to brush away the dust that lay,
my bruising heart, old, unkempt,
will beat its very last today.
You never knew there was no end,
a rope that bound you to me,
and lives for which there is no mend,
a heart which you will never see.
Kudos 17.25 after 20 votes |
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Comments, critiques and replies
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I like the emotion in your poems, this is no disappointment. | clifton [237] | 07/07/2009 |
Left me with a lump in my throat and a strange feeling in my stomach.Very good. | Mr Richard [207] | 10/07/2009 |
Oh! this is romantic...Swwwweeeeeeeet! | Shakespril [134] | 22/03/2010 |
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