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Now my brain hurts, Festerocious :-)
I'd be able to pick up a few new ones here, but I have to consult my friend 'Dict' for some enlightenment.
I'll have some tea, please.
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I believe this is a good example of how bad it can get if descriptives are overused. It gave me such a headache! Yes, we will be better off having tea instead.
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:)
It made my head hurt when I did it.
Reading it aloud is really hard, though I did learn a number of very useful words in the process.
I used to interview people at my last job by making them describe simple things (Technical Support Call Centre).
So I thought the simple task of coffee making would be a good example
Enjoyed the work to create it, sorry if caused a headache as you tried to read it though :D
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I loved it. I haven't laughed so much for weeks.
The prose is so purple it's heading into the ultraviolet. It's full of jawbreaking words I'd never heard of and wouldn't have the nerve to use if I did...
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It would make a great 'art' film with voice over and high qualityclose ups of the coffee being made and dramatic sound effects! Ha ha great!
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This is no ordinary cup of coffee.
This is a Marks and Spencers cup of coffee :D
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You lost me on the second line but my coffee never has that enlightenment you are quite a writer and really shouldbe making a living out of such talent
looked at your sight it is very interesting
mature gent
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Thanks Mature gent for the feedback.
This was something I did out of fun a while back.
Trying to get as many new words into a simple task wasn't easy.
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