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Driftwood on the shingle beach no definition, no home reliant upon external forces. the drag of the tide clawing back its escaped flotsam hugging it tightly drowning again, Or the foundations of a steaming fire, warm amongst the camp songs burnt and blackened, Or reclaimed, taken to a new house polished and shaped stroked and slapped Exhibited. Without choice there is no pleasure, I need to regain control, And stop being Driftwood.
Another masterpiece! faultless! I read it loud 3 times in a row... just can't help myself.
Poetic and poignant. You have made the driftwood an excellent metaphor.