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Shitty First Drafts

By DeUndrae | Posted: 18 August 2009

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Lately I've been trying to write my short story. I written an outline and planned it through all the way to the end, so writing the first draft is what I have to do. Needless to say, I couldn't write my first draft. 

Couldn't, you say? Yes, couldn't. Well, back then I used to have these buggers called inner critics. While I write I get these voices in my head telling me that my piece is no good and that I should give up. But the worst ones were the ones when they tell me I should write according to the acceptable standards. Usually these critcs be teachers, friends, writing books, anything that helped you through writing.

This got me into a wreck, and everytime I messed up I had to erase the phrase or sentence and write it until it's completely in my satisfaction. I even go on to apply my voice in there, but with perfection....

It was then that I read something from Anne Lamott, author of Bird by Bird. She said that in order for her to write she have to write what she calls a "shitty first draft." She said that it was okay to write garbage and make every blunder in the writing business, as long as you get it done. Needless to say, it's from shitty first drafts that we create good second drafts and great third drafts. This is a good method to banish those inner critics, or impale them if you're cruel.

"This made a lot of sense," I said to myself, and no sooner did I write my first shitty draft did I produce a second good draft and eventually an improved manuscript.

If Hemingway said, "The first draft of anything is worth shit," then I should make the shittiest draft so I can win. 

The way how I think about it is think about the worst book you've ever read and write worse. It'll be garbage, but at kleast you've got something done. And who knows, that piece might get an adward or make the bestselllers list.

Don't you agree?
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bobchoi
19 August 2009
I certainly do, DeUndrae, especially when I am writing rhyming poems.  I literally typed on single lines all the words and phrases that popped in my mind that bear on the theme, and then I'd pick and choose and put them into order.  Once started, the whole process typically takes 2-4 hours.  (All my poems are short!)   But once I've done that, it's almost impossible to fine-tune unless I get some feedback. 

On the other hand, when I write short stories or sketches, I've never used an outline.  I tend to incubate the idea or theme for as long as it takes (all in my head) and when I am ready, I 'll sit down on the keyboard and start typing.  I pause frequently but what turns out is usually in more or less final form.  I suppose I'm a hipshooter when writing free verses.  I'm thinking of giving the "shitty first draft" method a try in my next story.
bobchoi
19 August 2009
An example: I wrote "H1M Virus" in about two hours.  I had the idea in my mind but no outline or plan when I sat down at the keyboard.  So I basically made things up along the way and paused frequently.  The first draft is final.
DeUndrae
19 August 2009
Well, what works for me might not work for you bobchoi. But the "shitty draft method" is useful if you're crippled by the rules and perfectionism and inner critics. I've tried what you've done--writing by the seat of my pants and write the first draft as if it's the final draft--but I can never get anything done by doing that.

I know the "shitty first draft method" can be a help to some, but it doesn't come without a disadvantage. When you write a shitty draft you have to revise it possibly several times, especially if it's a novel.  Think of the haul you've put yourself into! But oh well, if a shitty first draft is what gets you to accomplish writing, then I say go for it. Something is better than nothing.

DeUndrae
Dragonwriter
22 August 2009
I agree with everything she said. And you can't have gold until you have shit, or it wouldn't be considered gold. Sometimes the first draft is incredible, but perfect? One click of spellcheck vanishes THAT fantasy fom my head....
Curran D
02 September 2009
I totally agree.

I once mentioned to a teacher that I sometimes found it condusive to write while drinking coffee and she proceded to read a passage about how coffee and alcohol, in a way, turn off your filters and whatnot and I thought "Yeah, in a first draft, that's kind of what you want." Oddly, I had read the Anne Lamott book in one of the teacher's other classes in an earlier semester.
chum600
04 December 2009
I don't know that I agree with anybody saying you should expect your first draft to be poor let alone shitty. If writing is creative rather than a chore then it is important to remember that creativity is not on tap - it doesn't always flow! 

However, it is reasonable to believe that you can always improve on everything you do and it pays to polish your work but sometimes I have produced something that I like with comparative ease. I might like it, but that is not to say that it is any good. 

Like everything in life we need to practice. There is no substitute for experience, some may start further up the ladder because they have a gift but determination and the willingness to learn do wonders so keep at it, whether it is hard, shitty or good to start with, you can and will improve.

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