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The mind running wild-continued

By Aldice | Posted: 23 September 2008

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PART 5-This one's for you. You're smile is the sweetest I've seen in a while most importantly a genuine one. I was enlightened with the realisation that I'm seeing you in this new light. Never quite knowing or realising at the time, the extent of my passions as well as the intensity. I never pictured myself 'falling' with you, but since you make me smile when I hear your voice even though I wasn't very fond of it at the beginning, I've grown to like it. Surely this must mean more than nothing. In fact you're something rather different to what I go for, a rare creature to the species I'm used to. You resemble a beautiful beast with a softness that is so delicate like that of a kitten but if riled up it snaps and his irritability is revealed, quite stubborn yet he is one to forgive-eventually that is, with some persuasion and a gentle push of course. 

PART 6-Why should I do that when I don't need to? Why should I give myself less than the best? Asking 'why?' is my prerogative. What can often happen is that sometimes when you try to figure out what this thing called life is, (needless to say) I don't mean the period between birth and death. You know exactly what I mean. In the process of trying to figure out what it is, there is the tendency to get confused  as one question can bring about many other reflective and thought provoking questions thus creating further riddles for the brain that only complicates things even more and in the end puts you off deciphering the enigma of life.
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Comments 
Gary Jarvis
23 September 2008
Another good piece of writing. I enjoyed although perhaps slightly more explanation on what has happened but not revealing all would keep interest and build on where it is. But enjoyable so keep it up.
rowland
25 September 2008
Hi,

Your writing is good but I found it a little confusing. Give a little more attention to punctuation and syntax and it will become much clearer. Stick with it you have talent. 
 Regards

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