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It's a concept that we can all relate to. Good job!
Maybe it's just me and I hate to second guess, but I don't quite get the "somehow" in "The store of memories somehow". Would "deep" or "below" be better choices? I don't know.
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This reminds me of Digging by Seamus Heaney. He describes his pen as a tool for digging up the past. Worth a read if you haven't yet.
Good work.
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