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Mlambere, reading your poems is becoming a guilty pleasure of mine. Your "Saucy" was good, and this one is even better. The theme might be hackneyed, but your lively metaphors and simile and your punchy style have turned it into a most delicious treat!
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I like this. A fictional (I hope) poem telling a story.
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I really liked this a cynical twist I guess she will never make it as she lives her life in movies...does she never learn or keep hoping?
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Thanks for the feedback all I enjoy writing this type of stuff I am refining this one and also working on another humourous verse regarding saucy lonely hearts, I leave that one for next months competition
regards
Marko
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