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This is the first time I read someone comparing the beach with some kitchen appliances - ha! They don't really exclude people in wheelchair, do they? It's just that it's hard to move the wheelchair on the sand, right?
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Yeah, But I was thinking about why they dont have an easy option, I dont understand it
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This poem doesn't have a very easy flow to it. Especially the last two lines
It didn't have enough emotion to it to reach me and get me thinking.
Just some constructive critisism.
Keep Writing,
taylorswift97
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And, may I also add, people in wheelchairs are allowed on the heach, or that is what I think. It might just be hard to get through the sand..
If they wanted to, I am sure they could go on the beach.
But this is still an interesting poem..
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