My babys smile by K

I remmember when you were born       I thought for my old life I would morn          but after just a little while      I I knew I couldn't live without your smile        After the first time I saw you grin                 I knew I was happier then back then         You made me feel unlike any other                    I knew that I was destined to be a mother       It has been years        You have two little sister          Your all blessings for me and the mister                      No person will ever take your place in my heart         our love is a piece of fine art      unique is the way I feel for you three    Everyday this I will decree  After all this time its true     your smiles still meltmy heart  right thru

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bobchoi

17 September 2009

I appreciate the feeling of a mother toward her child (I think!)  This piece speaks for all mothers in the world.  Some of the lines seemed contrived and the rhymes a bit forced, but it's probably just me... for I'm often guilty of that when I write poems.

Also see: The One Constant in Life (hhdavid) • Cutting remarks (mlambere) • The Mother of Criminals (Avalonsringing) • A poem of complete tish tosh and nonsense (Avalonsringing) • Billy Big A schoolday Poem LOL (Avalonsringing) • Road Trip (zion613) • Nothing is forgotten, Nothing is ever forgotten (lillypad) • Silence (Strawberry JAM) • Regret (Avalonsringing) • Born Swimmers (bobchoi)

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Writer K_rodgers	Total posts: 18
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Oklahoma city, UNITED STATES

My name is Kim Rodgers and I love to write. I am 26 and the mother of three beautiful children! I write children, poetry and adult novels.I am proud to say that soon my name will be published through one ... (Read more)

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Genre / category: Poetry