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Thanks, Gail. I'll check them out.
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Hi Gail thanks for the tips and your email. I did try to go through the work in the email and tried to send it back to you I don't think you recieved it for it said something about I was not digital. We have been away for 10 days so havent been on the sight or internet for a fornight. I am going to work on the article 'My Hero'.
MATURE GENT
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Gail just a few lines to let you know I have corrected the article my hero.
Would like your opinion. I have tried to follow the very good advice. One thought, one sentance and one point ,one paragraph.
Mature Gent
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Thanks, I will visit them
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Hi Gail just wonderd how you are doing have you left the site dont see much of your work but from my point veiw your very constructive feedback. I have been on writing .com but not my scene.
best wishes on whatever you are doing
mature gent
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