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All for this month a sad poem re my mum as a lost soul when my dad died His suits remain forlorn hanging on rails with no destination draws were opened and then gently shut so as not to wake the cufflinks but stirring dust in sepia eyes until max factor irrigated lines run dry her tea now cold the warmth within goodnight Jim.
I like the subtle yet poweful images and the emotion that they described.
enjoyed this poem it leaves you feeling the pain of losing some so close great words. mature gent