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I was drawn to every line of these poem except one: "knowing our fates are in the hands of persons unknown," These persons, who can they be? It irks me because I can't fathom who are these unknown persons who control your fate!
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This is an excellently inked and very poignant poem. The imagery is crisp and vivid, taking the reader through your thoughts and feelings in vivid detail, as I read. So tenderly and sweetly expressed, the poem flows effortlessly. Constructed with grace and style, I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you for sharing. Blessings........
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