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It' true! Love is addictive. "Hit me, oh hit me! ... slowly detroy me and bring me down." Such powerful, raw emotions. Very, very good! It's so good when I got to the end it seemed too short!
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oh love this, love it loads. its really really good. and its true that love can sometimes intoxiate you(did i spell that properly).
i didn't read the title when i first started to read (don't ask why), and i thought you were talking about drugs or smoking or something. i love the comparison though.
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Hi first let me say well done for the effort.
But for me it read's abit imature.is it meant to be a poem?
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Hello to Bobchoi, Iram 24 and Marygrace.
Thank you very much for reading this article and your feed back is greatly appreciated. =)
Also to Marygrace, your message wasn't exactly lucid but I got the point that you thought it was immature. Perhaps you could at least explain your reason behind your opinion, you know just so I understood where you are coming from..
Also the answer to your question as to whether it is a poem. Well when I wrote it I didn't plan for it to be a poem or anything else for that matter. It's just what was on my mind at the time. So it is what is, whatever you want it to be in fact. A poem to some and perhaps just a stream of consciousness to others.
Good luck with writing your book.. =)
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Some corrections to my comment:
"you know just so I understood where
you are coming from.."-What I actually meant to write is "you know just so I understand where you are coming from"
and
"So it is what is" > I meant to write "So it is what it is".
Thank you
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