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with an air of grace i read along with your verse. to me ut had the operatic grace of ballet yet dramatic incline of peter pan. altogether an epic poem that sings to me, most excellent x
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Debbie, thank you for your feedback. I'm really grateful to get feedback. I know some people like to leave votes but don't offer suggestions or encouragement. I appreciate the fact that you took the time to leave a critique of my work. Thanks again!
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Your windchimes literally jumped out of the page... I can see it swaying in the breeze, I can hear its sweat melody. Great poetry!
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Bobchoi...thank you. I really value your comments.
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well written and flows really enjoyed reading and feeling the sounds of your words
mature gent
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Thank you for your comments maturegent. They are greatly appreciated.
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Your words fit like God in silk pajamas. Keep on writing poems like this...please.
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Well written, very descriptive. Windchimes are such graceful little instruments, and your words showed that well. Very nice.
taylorswift97
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Thank you Taylor. I am glad that you liked it.
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this is a great poem!
Transports the reader to a place full of...peace.
Audrey
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