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Very nice Debbie. The poem has a lot of emotion to it. Great for Veterans Day.
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Great poem, Debbie, and very timely too. May I be so bold as to suggest a slightly different ending...?
So remember why these heroes died
and wear our poppy with pride!
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Thankyou my friends for the kind comments it is always nice when people express their views on other peoples work it makes it all worth while. hankyou
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You have captured the feelings, thoughts of a nation. With words so heart felt. Welcome back Debbie and thank you for your coments on two of my recent works I to have not been on the site as much. My wife has been fighting cancer, which she has won. We are now looking to a brighter future
Mature Gent
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Thankyou Mature Gent for your heartfelt comments, it was something that just had to be writen, may i say sincere thoughts are with you and your wife at this stressful time, and wish her a speedy recovery and live life to the full because life is too short to say 'maybe tommorow'! God bless.
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Hey!
This is an amazing poem.
All of your poems show that if you work hard enough at something, you can achieve anything and overcome your obstacles!
Keep writing!
audreyhepburn
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Wonderful job, Debbie.
You couldn't have said it better.
You chose the perfect words and they came together like a puzzle.
Happy Writing
taylorswift97
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So patriotic!
...but I can't understand why "for the 11th of the 11th of the 11th"
^_^
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