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This poem really makes me feel something inside, which is exactly what poem should do. I really like how you described their love by being "sown." I definitely like the way you say he "asks for her heart." It's very powerful and gives you a glimpse of just how big a deal love is. I loved it. Great job!
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! i think i might start to tear up. this poem is so beautiful and so beautifully written. i love it.
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