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Driving the highway with the radio on Turning towards your left Wondering what's next? The road is clear and filled with bars You look left and right Wondering the plight Suddenly without thinking, you make a left You see over your head An hurt old woman whose almost dead Jump out the car to see who it is To your shock and surprise She's about to die You yell and howler for her to please stay alive So shock to your eyes She opens her eyes She gives a nice smile and looks at your face A face so pure To her heavenly cure She smiles on down, knowing she's safe You put her in to the motor sickle Just to take her to the nearest hospital By the time you get there, it's already too late Her time at last Her soul has passed You cry and wither Thinking to yourself, it's all your fault Feeling responsible for having a life a halt But suddenly the woman, her soul is free She smiles at you Telling you to have faith in yourself Even though the things in life, just can't be helped.
Hey TheDarkNarrator! Very good- you really capture the love in this poem. Keep it up! audreyhepburn
Realistic, a plea from the heart. your unique style talks to me.