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Life is but a buzz. It is beautiful

By Aldice | Posted: 13 December 2009

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Flying high, I'm on a buzz.
Can you feel it?
The buzz of life.
I feel rejuvenated.
I don't want it to stop.
This is great you can't imagine.
Things I want are coming to me,
out of no where.

My heart's beating to the rythm of success.
One piece of joy after the other.
My attitude of gratitude is strong.
Sometimes it gets lost occasionally, 
but deep down it is always there.
Comfortable in my own skin, 
when I analyse, I come to the realisation,
that is the most important thing in life.
In this world, all you really have is yourself.
Embracing my existence is the way forward.
Never forgetting where I am from is a must.
You can't fully succeed without bringing 
the people who care about you most, 
who have been there through the good and bad times 
to the top with you to experience your joy. 
Sharing is thrilling, it makes you undergo 
furthermore joy.

The air is fresh and it is running through my veins.
The sun is shining even on a rainy day,
I love it-I am alive. 
This is extraordinary.
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Comments 
audreyhepburn
13 December 2009
Hey Aldice!
This a great poem, describing a great feeling.  Good work!
audreyhepburn
taylorswift97
26 January 2010
I agree with Audrey, You did a really good job on this.

There is one thing I want to point out:

"Sometimes it gets lost occasionaly" 

Sometimes and occasionaly are both the same thing, and you should replace one of them with something else. Here are a couple of suggestions.

1) Although it gets lost occasionally,
Deep down it is always there

2) Sometimes it is easily lost 
But deep down it is always there.

Personally, I like the first option. But it is totally up to you if you want to change or not, or how to change it.

Once again, you did a nice job on this!

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