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Supine in bed, I listened to rain dripping outside. While dewy flowers glistened, I closed my eyes and cried. Hearing a "meow", I stop. Looking, I see him move. It's Hank, furry as a mop, purring with love to prove. Wiping teardrops dry in his thick mane, I scratch him behind the ears. Close to my side he's content again. I smile, forgetting my tears.
Rhymes beautifully... with a touching theme. Well done!
Like the feline instinct of your poem. Good Work. Happy 2010.