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The Concrete Tree

By debbie reynolds | Posted: 11 October 2008

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Up and down the concrete tree,
The lift doesn't work,
The stairs are too many,
Our flat is number thirty-five,
Floor number twelve,
of this old concrete tree.

To look from the outside,
They all look the same,
Even on the inside they're just the same,
Maybe the colours are different,
But, cold grey concrete just the same,
Of this old concrete tree,
Built for you and me!

By debbie Reynolds.
All articles on this website by debbie reynolds are copyright ©debbie reynolds and should not be reproduced without the author's prior written consent. All opinions are the opinions of their respective authors and are not necessarily the opinions of The Writers' Circle.
Comments 
Carl
13 October 2008
I like it, except the last line which I would omit. Concrete tree is an interesting way to describe a tower block :P

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